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The Kitchen, Part 2: for life, from Pontiac

From Semaj Moran’s point of view, his customers cheated him.  Big time.  It was only ten dollars worth of marijuana, but the two women didn’t even pay that.  Instead, they gave him a fake bill.  He decided to collect what was due.

In a home on the bleak outer edge of Detroit–Pontiac, Michigan–Semaj Moran and an adult accomplice settled the score.  Semaj Moran used the gun, twice.  Loretta Fournier and Luann Robinson died.  Loretta had been shot three times.  One of the shots entered her head at close range.

Semaj Moran was fifteen years old.

Today he is seventeen, sentenced last month to prison for the rest of his natural life–a new poster child for juvenile life sentence cases in Michigan.  A new focus, too, for the troubling question: what do we do with them?

As someone who comes down hard on the side of victim’s rights and justice, I’m not eager to see Semaj Moran back out on the streets at 18 or 21.  More, until recently, I would have said that keeping him locked up for the rest of his life is the right thing to do.  He ended two lives.  He was old enough to know the meaning of right and wrong.  Above all, he broke his contract with the community that has a right to be safe from him from now on.

I like being safe, or as safe as I can be.  I don’t want people who committed violent crimes back in the community–in my neighborhood, on my street, living next door.  I don’t want to feel threatened when I go to my car at night.  And if justice means anything, the families of the victims of these destructive children and teenagers shouldn’t have to wonder who’s next.

I’ve been set in that opinion, in one case or another, for most of my adult life.  That is, until I met Efren Paredes.  Efren, serving out his own life for a crime he never committed, is convinced that juveniles need a chance to turn around.

Straight up, I was not willing to think this.  I’m committed to Efren’s case–wrongful conviction is wrongful conviction–but I’ve struggled to meet his thinking.  Yet he has made me think, and remember–to think about the teenagers I’ve known.  How scattered they can be.  How poor their judgment is.  How they can make a colossal, life-wrecking mistake and not understand how they got there.

I remember how smart-stupid I was as a teenager.  Easily smart-stupid enough to think I could live forever, because when you’re a teenager you know nothing really bad can really happen.  At least, not to you.

I recall what I’ve known for years, and it matters more now: that the adult brain–the part that controls judgment–doesn’t fully develop until age twenty-five.  Odd to look back on it–how the world changed after I was twenty-five.  All the adults I knew got smarter somehow, but I’m pretty sure that didn’t have anything to do with me starting to think like one.

And yet–who in their right mind, including me, wants a child capable of brutal murder let loose all over again?

Much of Michigan thinks the same way.  Juvenile or adult.  Parole or life sentence.  Either or.  If you’re too much of a risk to release at eighteen, you’re just too much of a risk.  Senate Bill 319 proceeds on nearly the same lines.   Alright, we have to give a judge the option of allowing you parole–but we won’t make it a very big option.  Let’s say forty-five years.  We’re not taking any chances.

There was a time I would have said, “Fair enough.”  When it comes to public safety, I’m not big on taking chances or giving them.  But change is happening, and I’m willing to think this question through:

Can we–or how can we–craft laws that protect our communities and take into account that a child, even a teenager, is still a malleable, perhaps salvageable thing?

Florida and Indiana are among the states showing a possible way.  Florida, for example, has what are called probation and restitution centers.  While these are short-term residential programs–not to exceed twelve months–their services and structure could suggest a longer term model.

From the Florida Department of Corrections website:

“Offender/residents participate in group counseling and case management sessions. The social learning environment provides offenders/residents with continuous peer support and challenges in daily living skills. The major learning themes are criminal thinking patterns, life skills, budgeting, personal responsibility and accountability, and employment readiness or skills training. Offender/residents prepare for re-entry into the work environment and transition into the community. “

Indiana, too, is changing, with legislation recently passed to allow judges to impose suspended adult sentences on juveniles: according to the IndyStar,

“Judges can sentence juveniles as adults but send them to a juvenile facility, where proponents of the law say there would be more supervision, better educational opportunities and a better chance to turn their lives around. Then, at age 18 when it’s time for the juvenile to be moved to an adult prison, there will be another hearing before a judge.

“If the 18-year-old can convince the judge he or she has straightened out, the judge can suspend the rest of the sentence. The young man or woman would then walk free, but any slip-up and he or she could be sent to adult prison to serve out the rest of the sentence.”

Too easy?  Too risky?  So what might conservative Michigan do?

I’ll introduce the possibility I have in mind by saying that I do not believe a young person can or should resume a fully normal life after committing murder.  To do so requires community trust, and the community has the right to withhold or reserve that trust.

On the other hand, there’s more than one way to approach the violation of trust–a long-term approach.


Let’s imagine that “Billy,” at the age of fifteen, shoots a classmate and robs him of a cellphone.  Under Michigan law as it stands, Billy is likely up for life-without-parole.  Prosecutors, judge and jury all agree, he committed the crime, and a much-loved teenager is dead.  Billy had no excuse for the shooting.  He took a life, and he’s going to give up all freedom of his own.  The idea of letting him back on the street at eighteen is laughable.

But let’s change the law, and change Billy’s story.

We’ll say that up to the age of eighteen, Billy stays in a secure facility for juvenile offenders.  He finishes high school, receives intensive counseling, and stays out of trouble.

Billy, now eighteen, moves to a secure facility created by our imaginary new law.  This is a facility for youthful offenders who were juveniles when their crimes were committed.  It contains no offender who was older than 17 at the commission of the crime.  In this facility, a wide range of counseling services, education, and work programs are offered.  Inmates earn their way into desirable job training programs by completing basic ones successfully.  Billy not only continues counseling, but enters college and completes an associate degree.  By age twenty-one, he’s ready for the next-step–training in a technical, mechanical or agricultural field that will make him a highly skilled worker.

At twenty-five, seven years after entering the institution, Billy is up for his first probation review.  Probation has graduated levels, and is highly restricted.  However, having completed all available counseling and training programs AND having continued without major violations of rehabilitation center policies, Billy is eligible.  He would not be eligible if he had failed any of the required programs.

His first step in restricted probation is to find a position with one of the rehabilitation center’s partner companies.  These are successful companies who helped to provide Billy with his training, and will take a strong role in mentoring him in his new job.

For the next five years, Billy must return every night–either to the rehab center or to a half-way house in the locality of his job.  He must wear an electronic monitoring device.  He must meet weekly with his probation officer AND a counselor, who will work with his employer-mentors to make sure his performance meets company standards.  If he fails to do his job successfully, he must return to the rehabilitation center until he can be placed in another job.  The five years of successful, supervised work experience are a requirement for the next step–as is paying restitution from his earnings to the family of his victim.

Assuming Billy has passed these five years with flying colors, he is now thirty.  It’s time for him to branch out.  He can now choose another employment.  He can also choose his place of residence within the State of Michigan.  However, he must continue to report to his probation officer every month, and maintain steady employment for the next five years.  He must continue to wear an electronic monitoring device.  He must check in with a counselor every month.  The counselor’s job is to spot problems, either in employment or living conditions, and work with Billy to help him make constructive choices.  If the counselor and probation officer agree that Billy is running into trouble, a board can require him to resume more frequent counseling and monitoring appointments, or help him to find employment again.

At the age of thirty-five, twenty years after the crime he committed, Billy is a college-educated, skilled worker, with ten years of solid job history behind him.  If he has committed NO violations of his parole, and maintains a productive lifestyle, a judge can choose to suspend the rest of his sentence.  ANY violent felony violation committed during the rest of his life will result in his return to adult prison for life.

If Billy has completed most of his programs successfully, but had one or two parole violations, the judge can decide how long and under what conditions to extend his monitored parole.  Four or more minor parole violations may be grounds for revoking parole and returning him to the appropriate secured facility until he can prove he deserves another chance at parole.

But what if Billy never passed at all?  What if he never got through the early programs, prior to age eighteen, and later in the youthful offender rehabilitation center?

This is where conditions kick in.  If Billy made it through some steps, but not others, he may still be at the center, working to fulfill the parole-after-job-training requirements.  If, by the age of twenty-five, he has never made any effort, has committed other violent offenses while in custody, or is found to be a community risk with a psychiatric disorder not responding to treatment, the State of Michigan must petition a judge to declare him incorrigible.  Upon a judge’s declaration of incorrigibility, Billy will then join the adult prison population to serve out life without parole, or, if his mental condition warrants it, be sent to a secured psychiatric facility for life.

Essentially, he will never be free, unless and until: he is a competent adult.  He proves his willingness to improve himself.  He makes restitution.  He shows that he has the life-skills and self-control to make it through a highly restrictive program of correction.


Billy’s story is not the law in Michigan yet.  It may never be the law.  But it’s a possibility of how the law could work, given a willingness on the part of the State to invest in the potential and future of its youngest prisoners.

In the meantime, with House Bill 4806 coming up for consideration, we may be looking at baby steps–at one change at a time, even a gradual one, to the meaning of juvenile justice.  Allowing Michigan judges to choose a term of years–and hopefully, from a wide range of probation options following that term of years–would be a good start.  Certainly, it’s time to move past “either-or”–a dichotomy that’s been alternately too lenient or else ineffectively harsh.

And then what?  As for Semaj Moran?  If Billy’s story were his story?

I’ve been thinking it over.  And I’d be willing to give it a try.



Sausage, legislation, and Will Rogers didn’t say it

I’ve never watched sausage made, but I’m pretty sure John Godfrey Saxe was right.  The process of making legislation involves a lot of chopping and squishing and other things you’d rather not see, smell, or hear.

As I promised last week, however, I’m back to lead a tour of the kitchen and the upcoming bills that affect juvenile lifers in Michigan.  Start this way, as we walk into the messy middle of things.

Last year the Supreme Court changed the recipe, and now Michigan and other states have some cooking to do.  The Court has ruled 5-4: no, you may not have laws that require you to sentence children less than eighteen to life without parole.

What this means: Juveniles can still be sentenced to life without parole.  But now the judge must have a choice; even in cases that used to require life without parole, period.

So, let’s look first at House Bill 4806.  This bill applies to prisoners who were sentenced before January 1, 2014, under the age of eighteen and are now serving mandatory life sentences without parole.  Key word, mandatory.

The House bill is intended to deal with past sentences, not future ones.  It allows either side–prosecutor or prisoner–to ask the court for resentencing.  It also allows both sides to have input.  There are three options for the new sentence:

*Life without parole (again)
*Life with possibility of parole
*A term of years at the judge’s discretion

The Michigan Senate, however, would like to limit any future leniency.  Senate Bill 319 deals with cases after January 1, 2014, and it is severe.

The options it includes:

*Life without parole (again)
*Life with possibility of parole after 45 years.

In effect, the Senate hopes to come as close as possible to nullifying the Supreme Court’s ruling.  A term of years, as suggested by the House, is not even an option.  Judges once again have very little discretion in creating a sentence to fit a particular case.

Both bills, however, require the court to consider factors including the child or teen’s home life, age and mental development.

Still with me?  Ready to go on?

House Bill 4807 makes no real change to the law.  It deals with family court jurisdiction over juveniles and involves a few word changes and an update of agency names.  Legal copy-editing, more or less.

House Bill 4808 updates sentences for the Michigan Penal Code, and it does so by adding clauses based on the passage of Senate Bill 319.  In other words, sentences remain the same, except for adding a possibility of parole for juvenile lifers after forty-five years.

We now get to the end of the mess–almost.  This is House Bill 4809 and Senate Bill 318.

Both of these bills have to do with the way parole hearings are conducted, and also with eligibility for parole.  Believe me, this is important.  House Bill 4809 contains what could be, from a prisoner’s perspective, a very nasty change.

First, the Senate bill (SIB 318) reflects Bill 319.  Certain crimes are not eligible for parole except in the case of juvenile lifers after forty-five years if the court allowed them life with parole.

The rest is the law as it stands.  Prisoners serving life sentences eligible for parole may see the parole board after fifteen years.  They must review the prisoner’s file every five years after that.  A public hearing is required before parole is granted or denied.

The House, on the other hand, would presumably like to save time and money.  House Bill 4809 allows the parole board to go no further than an interview with the prisoner conducted by one member of the parole board every two years.  If the board declines to conduct a public hearing, parole is considered to be denied.  The mandatory five year file-review and public hearing is removed from the law altogether.

If this change in the law is passed, prisoners will lose the chance to talk with board members who may see things differently than their interviewer.  Under the new system, even though one board member alone does not determine parole, he or she is placed in a position of strong influence.  It may be a cheaper way–but I’m not convinced it will be a fair one.

Time to wrap up, and we now exit the kitchen, glad for the fresh air.  For those who have stuck it out this long, thanks for coming on the tour!  Next stop, a breakfast restaurant where we’ll have bacon, eggs, and sausage–though personally, I’ll be taking home a doggie bag.


Blogging next time: how a judge’s decision forces Michigan to apply the Supreme Court’s ruling to past cases; why House Bill 4806 still needs to be law; and a request from Efren.  I’ll also talk about why I’ve never supported parole for juvenile lifers before–but I’m changing my mind.

“The silence of our friends”

The sun sets early on Lake Michigan in March.  In Saint Joseph, a small coastal Michigan city known for tourism, early French explorers, and a classic lighthouse, a lazy wind sweeps in off the shore ice–lazy because “it doesn’t bother to go around you, it just goes straight through.”

March 8th, 1989, was colder than usual; the windchill only twenty degrees above zero-fahrenheit.  The sun went down at 6:44 pm.  By 9 pm, it was bitter dark, with the parking lot lights of Roger’s Vineland Foods reflecting yellow-gray under the clouds.

Inside the store, fifteen-year-old Efren Paredes worked with his manager, Rick Tetzlaff, to finish up the last details of a long day.  Double-coupon day meant extra work.  Others had gone home, but earlier in the evening, Rick had asked Efren to stay, and to call his mother for permission.

“Nine-thirty,” she told him.  At the latest.  Remember, it’s a school night.

Efren knew.  He was already keeping up with the honor roll, foreign language club, Key Club, soccer….  Once home, he’d still have homework to do.

At 9:22, he punched out.  Then he and Rick walked outside to Rick’s car.  The wind had calmed, and their breath froze in the air.  Home was only a mile away, more or less.  Still too far to walk on a night like this one.

Moments later, Efren was inside the house, and Rick had driven away.  Efren kissed his mother, grabbed pizza for a makeshift supper, and went to his room to do his homework.

Rick, in the meantime, drove back to the store.  He still had work to do.  It was never finished.  Within half an hour, Rick Tetzlaff, at twenty-eight years old, was dead–shot in a back room for $11,000 in cash and checks.

One week later, Efren was arrested for murder.

What followed that night is a tangled story of high-school animosities, false witnesses, zealous police and still more zealous prosecutors–a defense attorney who made little defense, a jury with members who had connections to the murdered man’s family–a boy sitting stiff and terrified, watching his life sworn away, warned by his own counsel “not to cry,” while older boys, desperate to escape their own life sentences, put their crimes on him.

For nearly twenty-five years, he can only say, “I didn’t do it.”

But Efren is not a weakling.  He knows he could have been free a long time ago.  The cost?  Five words.  “I’m sorry.  I did it.”

For parole board members and prosecutors, it’s called showing remorse.  Lack of it indicates the worst case–a sociopath who can’t be reformed.

But for Efren, it’s not just five words that stand between him and freedom.  It’s his integrity.

He won’t say those words.  “I will not take responsibility for a crime I did not commit,” he told a parole board five years ago. “I never will do that even if it meant I could leave today.”*

With his appeals long exhausted, he has few chances left.  One of them lies in a recent Supreme Court decision to end mandatory life sentences for juveniles.  The State of Michigan is considering legislation in response that could force cases like Efren’s back into review.

Speaking from long and painful experience, Efren asks for help–not for himself alone, but for other child-prisoners who have been deemed irreclaimable.

As part of his petition at, he requests that the final language of the bill should include the judicial power to sentence juveniles for a term of years–where Michigan judges now have, in certain cases, only the option of life-with-parole, or life-without-parole.

The introductory text of the petition is as follows:

Members of the Michigan Senate and House of Representatives are scheduled to convene on August 27, 2013 to discuss House Bills 4806, 4807, 4808, and 4809 that would give Miller v. Alabama, 132 S.Ct 2455 (2012), retroactive application to cases that exhausted their appellate review prior to the high court ruling. In its decision the U.S. Supreme Court ended the imposition of mandatory life without parole (LWOP) sentences for juveniles nationwide.

Supporters of the bills are urging legislators to include in the final version language that provides judges with discretion to sentence juvenile offenders to a term of years rather than only the options of LWOP or parolable life sentences for each juvenile offender when considering mitigating circumstances. We oppose disallowing judges from exercising their professional discretion when sentencing juveniles and believe that sentences imposed should be rendered on a case-by-case basis.

You are invited to sign this petition which will send the message below to Rep. Joseph Haveman along with your individual state senator and representative. Your legislators will be contacted based on your zip code. You are also asked to share a link to this petition widely via e-mail, Facebook, Twitter and other available social media platforms. Along with your messages and posts you are asked to invite others to re-post and share the link as well.

We want to send a strong message to legislators about the important need to pass this legislation and reform the existing flawed sentencing scheme that condemns children to die in Michigan prisons. Draconian sentencing of juvenile offenders has no place in a civilized nation that prides itself on being a human rights leader in the world.

You can help support passage of these bills by attending the legislative hearing which will be held at the House Office Building, Room 519, on Tuesday, August 27, 2013 at 9:00 A.M. Please encourage as many people to attend as possible and to provide written and/or verbal testimony expressing support for passage of the bills.

It is important to tell stories of growth and maturation after a child makes a terrible mistake. Let legislators know that a second chance, to demonstrate how adolescence affected choices and the unique capacity for growth provides hope, sustains good behavior, and promotes family involvement in working towards rehabilitation and release.

“In the end we will not remember the words of our enemies, only the silence of our friends.” (Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.)

If you’d like to sign now, go to the petition link at:

Michigan Legislature: End Mandatory Life Without Parole Sentences for Juveniles in Michigan

For more on the issues regarding juvenile life sentences and the proposed changes to the law, I’ll be posting next week.

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The house of broken mirrors

You don’t get it, do you, Ariel Castro?  You didn’t get it, ever.  Not when you lured Michelle Knight into your house, promising a puppy for her son.  Not when you comforted Gina De Jesus’ parents at their daughter’s vigils.  Not when you were the proud daddy buying stuffed toys for Amanda Berry’s little girl.

Not when they snapped the handcuffs over your wrists.  Not when they sentenced you on 937 counts of rape, kidnapping, aggravated murder … the list goes on.  You looked the death penalty in the face, and decided that life in jail was better–but you still didn’t get it.

All you can find to say is “I’m not violent.”  “I’m just sick.”  “I’m a normal person.”  “I’m not a monster.”

I wonder if you ever watched television with the little girl–I won’t call her yours.  And watching some old fairy tale, did you ever see a hall of mirrors, smashed to pieces?  And getting up from the couch, did you happen to step on a piece of broken glass or two?  Because I’m thinking there was a lot of it.  Broken mirrors.

Now that society holds up the cold hard looking-glass, you recoil, because you don’t even recognize what you’re seeing.  Evil can’t look itself in the face.

“That’s not me.”  “I’m not a monster.”

Wait, what do you think a monster is?  Green scaly skin?  Horns?  Fangs?  Let us have a definition here.  But first let me give you a few examples, because the line between humans and monsters is so thin, a lot of us seem to miss it.

We get the obvious ones, and wonder why you don’t.  Murder–over the line.  Rape–over the line.  Kidnapping, beating, torturing–so far over the line it’s out of sight.

Slave labor–over the line.  Women forced into prostitution–over the line.  Ok, this is still basic.

Taking pictures of a woman bleeding to death on a supermarket floor.  Over the line.  Telling a suicidal poster on the internet, “Why don’t you go ahead?”  Over the line.

Posting obscene comments about the plight of a helpless person you’ve never met, who can’t defend themselves–wait, is that just trolling, or–

How about taking that million dollar bonus while the woman who works sixty hours a week for you can’t pay for the shoes that would help her painful feet, and you’re thinking about letting her go, because she’s “not meeting productivity standards in her department.”  I see something here, does that look like a line?

So let me draw you a line.  Crossing it starts with this simple piece of self-deception:

“What I want for my own gratification–though I may believe I have higher motives–is more important than someone else’s life, liberty, or well-being.”


Cross it at your peril.  Like that first drink of alcohol, you don’t know the end of it.  Maybe you’ll be the social drinker who lives to be ninety-nine.  Maybe you’ll be the forty-one year old John Doe on the slab at city morgue.  But once you cross, the decision is cast.  Maybe you’ll get back.  But it’s a lot harder than it looks.

Across the line, the way back turns blurry.  The little hill that was easy to slide down–it’s steep; it’s high.  It’s way easier to go down that next little hill.  Keep going, as the thin line recedes behind you–you can’t see it now.  Line?  Was there ever a line?  It must be somewhere ahead.

And so, walking down a path of broken mirrors, you never see where you lose your humanity.

Doing what you did did not transform you into a monster.  That change was already in your mind, one thought at a time.  You were what you were on the day you offered Michelle Knight a ride that she never came back from until now.  That action did not turn you into every family’s worst imaginings.  It only opened the door and let out the creature you had become.

You see, you got to the line before you acted.  And you crossed it before you made a decision.  You crossed it when you began to believe that someone else’s basic rights as a human being did not matter as much as your desires, your agenda.

You’re gone now–but you’re not.  Regrettably, you will go on troubling us long after you leave prison “nailed in a box, or in an ashcan.”  Even though we’ve sent you away–though we’re applauding the survivors of your cruelty, and feeling like the law did its job–still, that doesn’t seem like enough somehow; and leaves me wondering, what is there left to do?

Perhaps it’s this–which is for us to take a good hard look at your trail of broken glass.  Then think twice the next time we go to break a mirror.